[quicwg/base-drafts] Fix grammar in 3.2. Receiving Stream States (#2830)
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The phrase, `Before creating a stream, all streams of the same type with lower-numbered stream IDs MUST be created.`, is semantically equal to `Before all streams (of the same type with lower-numbered stream IDs) create a stream, all streams of the same type with lower-numbered stream IDs MUST be created.` This is not correct since all streams don't create a (new) stream. Moreover, by definition, a stream is created by sending data[1] or STREAM frames implicitly create a stream[2]. This indicates a stream itself doesn't create another stream. [1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-transport-20#section-2 [2] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-transport-20#section-19.8 You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2830 -- Commit Summary -- * Fix grammar in 3.2. Receiving Stream States -- File Changes -- M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (2) -- Patch Links -- https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2830.patch https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2830.diff -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2830
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