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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] RFC Editor Copyedits (PR #4956)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Tue, 15 February 2022 22:39 UTC

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@martinthomson commented on this pull request.



>  implementation can decide to close a QUIC stream and communicate the type of
 error. Wire encodings of error codes are defined in {{http-error-codes}}.
-Stream errors are distinct from HTTP status codes which indicate error
+Stream errors are distinct from HTTP status codes that indicate error

Yep, it's "Stream errors are distinct from (HTTP status codes that indicate...)"

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