Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Recovery editorial pass (#2381)

ianswett <notifications@github.com> Tue, 29 January 2019 02:00 UTC

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ianswett commented on this pull request.



> @@ -454,10 +456,9 @@ a subsequent connection attempt to the server.
 
 When packet protection keys are discarded (see Section 4.9 of {{QUIC-TLS}}), all
 packets that were sent with those keys can no longer be acknowledged because
-their acknowledgements cannot be processed anymore. The sender considers them no
-longer in flight. That is, the sender SHOULD discard all recovery state
-associated with those packets and MUST remove them from the count of bytes in
-flight.
+their acknowledgements cannot be processed anymore. The sender SHOULD discard
+all recovery state associated with those packets and MUST remove them from

Fixed

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