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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Alternative packet format presentation (#3573)
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This is not an editorial decision, this is a request for feedback on whether this form of presentation makes more sense.  So far we have mixed feedback.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573

-- Commit Summary --

  * Test for an alternative format
  * Some more formalism
  * Refinements
  * One fewer line
  * Follow own conventions
  * Refine format syntax more
  * Apply the new format throughout
  * Use length instead of len now that there is room

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-http.md (109)
    M draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md (75)
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md (98)
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (699)

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https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573.diff

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<p>This is not an editorial decision, this is a request for feedback on whether this form of presentation makes more sense.  So far we have mixed feedback.</p>

<hr>

<h4>You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:</h4>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href='https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573'>https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573</a></p>

<h4>Commit Summary</h4>
<ul>
  <li>Test for an alternative format</li>
  <li>Some more formalism</li>
  <li>Refinements</li>
  <li>One fewer line</li>
  <li>Follow own conventions</li>
  <li>Refine format syntax more</li>
  <li>Apply the new format throughout</li>
  <li>Use length instead of len now that there is room</li>
</ul>

<h4>File Changes</h4>
<ul>
  <li>
    <strong>M</strong>
    <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573/files#diff-3d2f9fd0738589657498f2c06ee02f2f">draft-ietf-quic-http.md</a>
    (109)
  </li>
  <li>
    <strong>M</strong>
    <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573/files#diff-56e4bfb748c2d740a862d41ab8d0dcd6">draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md</a>
    (75)
  </li>
  <li>
    <strong>M</strong>
    <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573/files#diff-afdf56cd6ee6d10d94d669541f99bc07">draft-ietf-quic-tls.md</a>
    (98)
  </li>
  <li>
    <strong>M</strong>
    <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573/files#diff-db016291106766877c4921a79f8596e0">draft-ietf-quic-transport.md</a>
    (699)
  </li>
</ul>

<h4>Patch Links:</h4>
<ul>
  <li><a href='https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573.patch'>https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573.patch</a></li>
  <li><a href='https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573.diff'>https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3573.diff</a></li>
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