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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Describe QPACK Feedback mechanisms (#1410)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Thu, 14 June 2018 19:02 UTC

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Redone on top of #1400; look at the most recent commit if you want to see just this change.  The suggestion to land the text in the appropriate instructions and just forward-reference from the intro section does substantially reduce the "wall of text," and I think it reads much better.

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