[quicwg/base-drafts] 198883: Jana's editorial suggestions

Martin Thomson <noreply@github.com> Wed, 04 March 2020 02:51 UTC

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  Branch: refs/heads/close-0rtt
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: 198883f45dca18bee33a3a5f32e3550a4e11926d
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/198883f45dca18bee33a3a5f32e3550a4e11926d
  Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
  Date:   2020-03-04 (Wed, 04 Mar 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Jana's editorial suggestions

Co-Authored-By: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>