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@kazu-yamamoto commented on this pull request.



> @@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ a packet containing unacknowledged CRYPTO data earlier than the PTO expiry,
 subject to address validation limits; see Section 8.1 of {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}.
 
 Peers can also use coalesced packets to ensure that each datagram elicits at
-least one acknowledgement.  For example, clients can coalesce an Initial packet
+least one acknowledgement.  For example, a client can coalesce an Initial packet

This is followed by "a server". Why are both singular and plural used in the same sentence?

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<p><b>@kazu-yamamoto</b> commented on this pull request.</p>

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<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3893#discussion_r453416287">draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt; @@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ a packet containing unacknowledged CRYPTO data earlier than the PTO expiry,
 subject to address validation limits; see Section 8.1 of {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}.
 
 Peers can also use coalesced packets to ensure that each datagram elicits at
-least one acknowledgement.  For example, clients can coalesce an Initial packet
+least one acknowledgement.  For example, a client can coalesce an Initial packet
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<p>This is followed by "a server". Why are both singular and plural used in the same sentence?</p>

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