[quicwg/base-drafts] Update draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (#1037)

martinduke <notifications@github.com> Fri, 05 January 2018 21:55 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Update draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (#1037)
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The introductory text to the packet size section has some syntax problems:
- It makes it sound like the Initial packet can be below 1200 Bytes
- The 1200 Byte restriction could, in principle, apply to an out of order 0RTT packet
- The "allow receipt" restriction is vague; the new language is IMO more prescriptive.
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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1037

-- Commit Summary --

  * Update draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (22)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1037.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1037.diff

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