[quicwg/base-drafts] Gorrys invariant nits (#3730)

Gorry Fairhurst <notifications@github.com> Fri, 05 June 2020 07:06 UTC

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Editorial NiTs when reviewing the invariant text. These NiTs address readability issues, and do not intend to change the meaning of the text.
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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3730

-- Commit Summary --

  * Expand SCID/DCID
  * Add big endian to notation section
  * not specified -&gt; not encoded for DCID length
  * Make references to concepts clearer
  * Use transport endpoint
  * Remove the bit about rules and just list the assumption

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md (44)
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (56)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3730.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3730.diff

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