Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Allow ClientHello to span multiple QUIC packets (#3045)

[ekr <[e-mail]>]

ekr approved this pull request.

LGTM

> -cryptographic handshake message, MUST fit in a single UDP datagram (see
-{{handshake}}).  The first CRYPTO frame sent always begins at an offset of 0
-(see {{handshake}}).
-
-Note that if the server sends a HelloRetryRequest, the client will send a second
-Initial packet.  This Initial packet will continue the cryptographic handshake
-and will contain a CRYPTO frame with an offset matching the size of the CRYPTO
-frame sent in the first Initial packet.  Cryptographic handshake messages
-subsequent to the first do not need to fit within a single UDP datagram.
+the start or all of the first cryptographic handshake message.  The first
+CRYPTO frame sent always begins at an offset of 0 (see {{handshake}}).
+
+Note that if the server sends a HelloRetryRequest, the client will send another
+series of Initial packets.  These Initial packets will continue the
+cryptographic handshake and will contain CRYPTO frames starting at an offset
+matching the size of the CRYPTO frames sent in the first flight of Initial

"matching the size" is a bit odd. Perhaps "immediately after the last byte of..."

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