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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] f8425c: Clarify some PMTU language (#1037)
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  Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: f8425c1ea712898f15f05a3829ba9e3f31f27e43
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/f8425c1ea712898f15f05a3829ba9e3f31f27e43
  Author: martinduke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
  Date:   2018-01-12 (Fri, 12 Jan 2018)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Clarify some PMTU language (#1037)

* Update draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

The introductory text to the packet size section has some syntax problems:
- It makes it sound like the Initial packet can be below 1200 Bytes
- The 1200 Byte restriction could, in principle, apply to an out of order 0RTT packet
- The "allow receipt" restriction is vague; the new language is IMO more prescriptive.

* Remove trailing whitespace



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