[quicwg/base-drafts] Remove pointer to appendix in PTO section (recover) (#3391)

mirjak <notifications@github.com> Thu, 23 January 2020 11:37 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Remove pointer to appendix in PTO section (recover) (#3391)
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I proposed to remove this sentence here because all these values have actually been just defined in the previous sections. If a pointer to the appendix is desired, I think that should be mentioned earlier (e.g. in the intro already) that these lists existing in the appendix.
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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3391

-- Commit Summary --

  * Remove pointer to appendix in PTO section (recover)

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md (3)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3391.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3391.diff

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