Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Massive batch of probably-editorial nits (#3805)

Dmitri Tikhonov <notifications@github.com> Fri, 10 July 2020 21:56 UTC

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@dtikhonov commented on this pull request.



>  
 Client:
 
 : The endpoint initiating a QUIC connection.
 
 Server:
 
-: The endpoint accepting incoming QUIC connections.
+: The endpoint accepting an incoming QUIC connection.

đź‘Ž : the proposed version sounds worse.

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