Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] editorial: split long sentence (recovery) (#3382)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Wed, 22 January 2020 22:47 UTC

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martinthomson commented on this pull request.



> @@ -184,8 +184,8 @@ measurement are unified across packet number spaces.
 TCP conflates transmission order at the sender with delivery order at the
 receiver, which results in retransmissions of the same data carrying the same
 sequence number, and consequently leads to "retransmission ambiguity".  QUIC
-separates the two: QUIC uses a packet number to indicate transmission order,
-and any application data is sent in one or more streams, with delivery order
+separates the two: QUIC uses a packet number to indicate transmission order.

The colon here probably needs to be a period now.

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