Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise intro text (recovery) (#3380)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Wed, 22 January 2020 17:28 UTC

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Subject: Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise intro text (recovery) (#3380)
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Isn't the introduction the right place for ad copy, though?  It describes what the document hopes to achieve and why it's worth doing.  I think some of the rewording you've done here is an improvement, but I'm not convinced we should edit out the fact that we're trying to incorporate many years of work that hasn't been universally deployable.

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