[quicwg/base-drafts] Ekr wglc comments (#3856)

ekr <notifications@github.com> Wed, 08 July 2020 02:24 UTC

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Hopefully some minor editorial changes.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3856

-- Commit Summary --

  * Clarify opaque
  * Clarify gthe ? in the encoding language
  * Don&#39;t say that unidirectional is a long message. That just confuses things
  * Clarify the example of stream IDs
  * Clarify the stream ID limits. Remove redundancy
  * You actually don&#39;t know definitively how many bytes were sent
  * early data -&gt; 0-RTT data
  * Fix description of the results of Version Negotiation. Remind me why this isn&#39;t called Version Error...
  * You don&#39;t change SCID on later packets
  * Clarify impact of on-path spoofing
  * Clarify awkward text around preferred connection
  * Tiny wording change
  * Retry packets don&#39;t use keys derived from the handshake
  * One follows the guidance
  * Remove commas, this is a restrictive clause
  * includes -&gt; included
  * Clarify which field

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (110)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3856.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3856.diff

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