Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] HTTP/3: Add RFC8446 reference for TLS 1.3. (#3483)

[Martin Thomson <[e-mail]>]

martinthomson approved this pull request.

I've suggested some symbolic references.

> @@ -112,9 +112,9 @@ The QUIC transport protocol incorporates stream multiplexing and per-stream flow
 control, similar to that provided by the HTTP/2 framing layer. By providing
 reliability at the stream level and congestion control across the entire
 connection, it has the capability to improve the performance of HTTP compared to
-a TCP mapping.  QUIC also incorporates TLS 1.3 at the transport layer, offering
-comparable security to running TLS over TCP, with the improved connection setup
-latency of TCP Fast Open {{?RFC7413}}.
+a TCP mapping.  QUIC also incorporates TLS 1.3 {{?RFC8446}} at the transport

```suggestion
a TCP mapping.  QUIC also incorporates TLS 1.3 {{?TLS13=RFC8446}} at the transport
```
(note line wrapping is again likely needed here)

> @@ -112,9 +112,9 @@ The QUIC transport protocol incorporates stream multiplexing and per-stream flow
 control, similar to that provided by the HTTP/2 framing layer. By providing
 reliability at the stream level and congestion control across the entire
 connection, it has the capability to improve the performance of HTTP compared to
-a TCP mapping.  QUIC also incorporates TLS 1.3 at the transport layer, offering
-comparable security to running TLS over TCP, with the improved connection setup
-latency of TCP Fast Open {{?RFC7413}}.
+a TCP mapping.  QUIC also incorporates TLS 1.3 {{?RFC8446}} at the transport
+layer, offering comparable security to running TLS over TCP, with the improved
+connection setup latency of TCP Fast Open {{?RFC7413}}.

```suggestion
connection setup latency of TCP Fast Open {{?TFO=RFC7413}}.
```

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