[quicwg/base-drafts] Fix: a connection is not identified by a *collection* (#1632)

Dmitri Tikhonov <notifications@github.com> Wed, 01 August 2018 16:09 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Fix: a connection is not identified by a *collection* (#1632)
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This small change contains several other improvements, each with a clear
purpose behind it.

    1. Replace the word "collection" with the word "set," as the former
       looks a lot like "connection."

    2. Remove the "unlikely to be unique" parenthetical clause: it is
       obvious that there can only be one unique zero-length connection ID.

    3. Drop the "assigned to it" part of the sentence, as it is unnecessary
       in this introductory paragraph.
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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1632

-- Commit Summary --

  * Fix: a connection is not identified by a *collection*

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (8)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1632.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1632.diff

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