[quicwg/base-drafts] Make language of representations consistent. (#3133)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Tue, 22 October 2019 23:37 UTC

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This was inspired by the comment by afrind at
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2942#discussion_r335222617.

For each representation, uniformly
* use the word &quot;representation&quot; in the first sentence;
* use the word &quot;identifies&quot; if it&#39;s a verbatim entry; &quot;encodes&quot; otherwise;
* identify relative versus post-base indexing in the first sentence;
* move drawing right after first sentence;
* use consistent language describing binary format.
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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3133

-- Commit Summary --

  * Make language of representations consistent.

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md (95)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3133.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3133.diff

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