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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Ekr editorial 17 http (#2204)
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You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204

-- Commit Summary --

  * Editorial
  * Remove extra text about handling invalid CANCEL_PUSH frames.
  * Apparently we don't like em-dash
  * Move settings frame description upward for greater clarity
  * Clarify the general rule about deciding errors and then remove the
  * Clean up some errors and redundancy
  * Remove more redundancy
  * More editorial
  * Self review

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-http.md (181)
    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md (6)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204.diff

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<h4>You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:</h4>
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href='https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204'>https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204</a></p>

<h4>Commit Summary</h4>
<ul>
  <li>Editorial</li>
  <li>Remove extra text about handling invalid CANCEL_PUSH frames.</li>
  <li>Apparently we don&#39;t like em-dash</li>
  <li>Move settings frame description upward for greater clarity</li>
  <li>Clarify the general rule about deciding errors and then remove the</li>
  <li>Clean up some errors and redundancy</li>
  <li>Remove more redundancy</li>
  <li>More editorial</li>
  <li>Self review</li>
</ul>

<h4>File Changes</h4>
<ul>
  <li>
    <strong>M</strong>
    <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204/files#diff-0">draft-ietf-quic-http.md</a>
    (181)
  </li>
  <li>
    <strong>M</strong>
    <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204/files#diff-1">draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md</a>
    (6)
  </li>
</ul>

<h4>Patch Links:</h4>
<ul>
  <li><a href='https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204.patch'>https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204.patch</a></li>
  <li><a href='https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204.diff'>https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2204.diff</a></li>
</ul>

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