[quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text around preferred address (#3589)

Eric Kinnear <notifications@github.com> Mon, 20 April 2020 08:00 UTC

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Add remaining changes from #3353, specifically: 
- Handshake finished -&gt; confirmed
- Move text around to clarify existing requirements around local addresses and CIDs
- Add note nearby when describing use of SPA that preferred address can be used with CIDs other than that specified in the TP (this is already described later in the document)


Closes #3353.
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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3589

-- Commit Summary --

  * Clarify existing requirements on CID use to consolidate expected behavior
  * Make {{issue-cid}} and {{retire-cid}} consistent
  * Clarify handshake confirmed for preferred address, note that any CID is valid for use as mentioned later

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (53)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3589.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3589.diff

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