[quicwg/base-drafts] Section 3.1 -> Section 4 ? (#3707)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Mon, 01 June 2020 09:48 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Section 3.1 -> Section 4 ? (#3707)
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Section 3 has just one subsection, which goes into detail about how QUIC is similar and different than TCP.  This might be better as its own top-level section.

I was always taught to avoid a) sections that only subsections and no text of their own, b) sections that have precisely one subsection, c) lists with fewer than 3 items in them.

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