[quicwg/base-drafts] 8de902: editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me ...

Jana Iyengar <noreply@github.com> Thu, 23 January 2020 22:25 UTC

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  Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: 8de90213184a323618a32502904f37673640ca5d
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/8de90213184a323618a32502904f37673640ca5d
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-22 (Wed, 22 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me (recovery)

So here is an alternative proposal. However I also wonder why this paragraph is a MUST requirement while the previous statement (avoiding multiple samples of the same packet) is only a SHOULD? I would see it rather the other way around or both MUSTs.


  Commit: d3cc03174ba5f0a7d7bbcc451d08c920a0fdf9d1
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/d3cc03174ba5f0a7d7bbcc451d08c920a0fdf9d1
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-22 (Wed, 22 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  English hard be...


  Commit: f8162becbde33a2e11f43f303b511c3dad949ade
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/f8162becbde33a2e11f43f303b511c3dad949ade
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

Co-Authored-By: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>


  Commit: 81f10dc8a143f6da754daab8690256c0597a6d07
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/81f10dc8a143f6da754daab8690256c0597a6d07
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

Co-Authored-By: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>


  Commit: 50db5c9fed482f532c38a59115fc22f3e9557850
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/50db5c9fed482f532c38a59115fc22f3e9557850
  Author: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #3383 from mirjak/patch-8

editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me (recovery)


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