Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Use of "in order" might be misunderstood as an ordering requirement (2) (#4039)

Gorry Fairhurst <notifications@github.com> Thu, 20 August 2020 18:53 UTC

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Date: Thu, 20 Aug 2020 11:53:53 -0700
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That works for me - starting with the construction seems clear.

Gorry 


> On 20 Aug 2020, at 19:11, Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> wrote:
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> "in order to" seems like a well-known construction, so I'm not concerned about its existence. Your rewording loses the implication of "SHOULD... because you'll need to...."
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> Though I see your point that this sentence could be parsed as "reading in order" being the thing servers SHOULD be able to do. Perhaps "In order to properly form X, servers SHOULD Y"?
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