[quicwg/base-drafts] Use semicolons for section references (#2626)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Tue, 16 April 2019 22:18 UTC

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"This is a description of something technical; see {{place}} [for more details]." is more correct than "This is a description of something technical, see {{place}} [for more details]." because the "...see {{place}}" is a separate thought.  The comma is appropriate when it's saying "For more details, see {{place}}." because that's a single thought.

We have a mix throughout the documents; this PR attempts to reconcile them.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2626

-- Commit Summary --

  * Use semicolons for section references where not part of the parent sentence
  * Same in TLS
  * Same in Recovery
  * Same in QPACK

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md (2)
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md (4)
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md (10)
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (38)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2626.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2626.diff

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