From nobody Thu Aug 20 01:47:05 2020 Return-Path: X-Original-To: quic-issues@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: quic-issues@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2FE1C3A0A39 for ; Thu, 20 Aug 2020 01:47:04 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -2.005 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.005 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.001, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, HTML_IMAGE_ONLY_16=1.092, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, MAILING_LIST_MULTI=-1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_BLOCKED=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H4=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=github.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 5aTsMl3qmzeY for ; Thu, 20 Aug 2020 01:47:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from out-16.smtp.github.com (out-16.smtp.github.com [192.30.254.199]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ADH-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 03A3B3A0A36 for ; Thu, 20 Aug 2020 01:47:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: from github-lowworker-39b4a70.va3-iad.github.net (github-lowworker-39b4a70.va3-iad.github.net [10.48.16.66]) by smtp.github.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 82B5F7A0E28 for ; Thu, 20 Aug 2020 01:47:01 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=github.com; s=pf2014; t=1597913221; bh=iXuk2phIrIm5FDwWYwgSSyaJyBm79jNz/B89MrL0tnk=; h=Date:From:Reply-To:To:Cc:Subject:List-ID:List-Archive:List-Post: List-Unsubscribe:From; b=R7AuntJoBgUl+1vBMhxmd09xsgik1hYh7gB6yG/iW3G2fexzsxkr5iKjfVjOkUqxQ YD+FKZwDyR4qEYU+n5uzGlK346MHNHohefVQ4Iq52RoencOnaImzL889IbxQ2HgT8k Vjbo2X8u0PRe/7O+A80WdiVq/9vESrx4WzR/vnhA= Date: Thu, 20 Aug 2020 01:47:01 -0700 From: Gorry Fairhurst Reply-To: quicwg/base-drafts To: quicwg/base-drafts Cc: Subscribed Message-ID: Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Use of "in order" might be misunderstood as an ordering requirement (4) (#4041) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="--==_mimepart_5f3e38853e3d9_20019645847b6"; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Precedence: list X-GitHub-Sender: gorryfair X-GitHub-Recipient: quic-issues X-GitHub-Reason: subscribed X-Auto-Response-Suppress: All X-GitHub-Recipient-Address: quic-issues@ietf.org Archived-At: X-BeenThere: quic-issues@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 List-Id: Notification list for GitHub issues related to the QUIC WG List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Aug 2020 08:47:04 -0000 ----==_mimepart_5f3e38853e3d9_20019645847b6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit There are other uses of "in order" that the editors may like to address to avoid potential misunderstanding: /An adversarial receiver might intentionally not acknowledge packets containing stream data in order to force the sender to store the unacknowledged stream data for retransmission./ would be clearer as /An adversarial receiver might intentionally not acknowledge packets containing stream data so that it forces the sender to store the unacknowledged stream data for retransmission./ -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4041 ----==_mimepart_5f3e38853e3d9_20019645847b6 Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit

There are other uses of "in order" that the editors may like to address to avoid potential misunderstanding:

/An adversarial receiver might intentionally not acknowledge packets containing stream data in order to force the sender to store the unacknowledged stream data for retransmission./ would be clearer as /An adversarial receiver might intentionally not acknowledge packets containing stream data so that it forces the sender to store the unacknowledged stream data for retransmission./

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