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Subject: [quicwg/version-negotiation] 21da1a: other david comments
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  Branch: refs/heads/ekr_editorial_auth48
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation
  Commit: 21da1a99646e1530ba6062cddda9d78ae1d81873
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/21da1a99646e1530ba6062cddda9d78ae1d81873
  Author: EKR <ekr@rtfm.com>
  Date:   2023-05-11 (Thu, 11 May 2023)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  other david comments


  Commit: 8a5edd74bcd372b53998b6c241d0a254e5aee7c4
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/8a5edd74bcd372b53998b6c241d0a254e5aee7c4
  Author: EKR <ekr@rtfm.com>
  Date:   2023-05-11 (Thu, 11 May 2023)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  Outside the handshake transcript


Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/compare/0c360c554f79...8a5edd74bcd3