Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise intro text (recovery) (#3380)
Jana Iyengar <notifications@github.com> Thu, 23 January 2020 02:11 UTC
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Subject: Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise intro text (recovery) (#3380)
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janaiyengar approved this pull request. I'm fine with this new language. > @@ -90,17 +90,13 @@ code and issues list for this draft can be found at # Introduction -QUIC is a new multiplexed and secure transport atop UDP. QUIC builds on decades -of transport and security experience, and implements mechanisms that make it -attractive as a modern general-purpose transport. The QUIC protocol is -described in {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. - -QUIC implements the spirit of existing TCP congestion control and loss recovery -mechanisms, described in RFCs, various Internet-drafts, and also those prevalent -in the Linux TCP implementation. This document describes QUIC congestion -control and loss recovery, and where applicable, attributes the TCP equivalent -in RFCs, Internet-drafts, academic papers, and/or TCP implementations. - +QUIC is a new multiplexed and secure transport protocol atop UDP, specified in +{{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. This document describes congestion control and loss +recovery for QUIC. Mechanisms described in this documnet follow the spirit ```suggestion recovery for QUIC. Mechanisms described in this document follow the spirit ``` > -of transport and security experience, and implements mechanisms that make it -attractive as a modern general-purpose transport. The QUIC protocol is -described in {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. - -QUIC implements the spirit of existing TCP congestion control and loss recovery -mechanisms, described in RFCs, various Internet-drafts, and also those prevalent -in the Linux TCP implementation. This document describes QUIC congestion -control and loss recovery, and where applicable, attributes the TCP equivalent -in RFCs, Internet-drafts, academic papers, and/or TCP implementations. - +QUIC is a new multiplexed and secure transport protocol atop UDP, specified in +{{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. This document describes congestion control and loss +recovery for QUIC. Mechanisms described in this documnet follow the spirit +of existing TCP congestion control and loss recovery mechanisms, described in +RFCs, various Internet-drafts, or academic papers, and also those prevalent in +the Linux TCP implementation. Where applicable, this document attributes the TCP ```suggestion the Linux TCP implementation. ``` > -attractive as a modern general-purpose transport. The QUIC protocol is -described in {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. - -QUIC implements the spirit of existing TCP congestion control and loss recovery -mechanisms, described in RFCs, various Internet-drafts, and also those prevalent -in the Linux TCP implementation. This document describes QUIC congestion -control and loss recovery, and where applicable, attributes the TCP equivalent -in RFCs, Internet-drafts, academic papers, and/or TCP implementations. - +QUIC is a new multiplexed and secure transport protocol atop UDP, specified in +{{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. This document describes congestion control and loss +recovery for QUIC. Mechanisms described in this documnet follow the spirit +of existing TCP congestion control and loss recovery mechanisms, described in +RFCs, various Internet-drafts, or academic papers, and also those prevalent in +the Linux TCP implementation. Where applicable, this document attributes the TCP +equivalent. ```suggestion ``` > -attractive as a modern general-purpose transport. The QUIC protocol is -described in {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. - -QUIC implements the spirit of existing TCP congestion control and loss recovery -mechanisms, described in RFCs, various Internet-drafts, and also those prevalent -in the Linux TCP implementation. This document describes QUIC congestion -control and loss recovery, and where applicable, attributes the TCP equivalent -in RFCs, Internet-drafts, academic papers, and/or TCP implementations. - +QUIC is a new multiplexed and secure transport protocol atop UDP, specified in +{{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. This document describes congestion control and loss +recovery for QUIC. Mechanisms described in this documnet follow the spirit +of existing TCP congestion control and loss recovery mechanisms, described in +RFCs, various Internet-drafts, or academic papers, and also those prevalent in +the Linux TCP implementation. Where applicable, this document attributes the TCP +equivalent. I don't think this last sentence is useful or necessary. -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3380#pullrequestreview-347024465
- [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise intr… mirjak
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … mirjak
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … mirjak
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … mirjak
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial: More concise … Jana Iyengar