[quicwg/base-drafts] First octet changes (#2006)

[Martin Thomson <[e-mail]>]

This is a first draft of the changes that we discussed, first in NYC, then confirmed in Bangkok.

I had to recast "packet number protection" as header protection, but I took the opportunity to expand the text and organize it some more.  I'm not especially happy with the picture, and could probably drop that, but I think that the changes clarify the process more.

The changes are all exactly as discussed, except that I ended up moving the ODCIL field from the Retry packet, which conveniently fit into four bits that I was struggling to describe what to do with.  The low four bits in Retry can't be protected because Retry packets aren't protected.  This seemed like a neat way of handling that.

I'm not certain that these are the only changes needed, but I think that this is essentially complete.  It's good to get everything nailed down finally.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2006

-- Commit Summary --

  * Rough in first octet changes
  * Add the TLS bits, refine some of the transport bits
  * Reword

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md (212)
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (209)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2006.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2006.diff

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