[quicwg/base-drafts] [Editorial] Lots of forward references (#3763)
Watson Ladd <notifications@github.com> Sun, 14 June 2020 22:54 UTC
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When I was reading quic-transport I found it very difficult to deal with the forward references. Streams are presented before connections, the overall state machine isn't introduced up front, packets come long after frames, and both are long before the wire formats are described. It might worth revisiting the section ordering. -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/3763
- [quicwg/base-drafts] [Editorial] Lots of forward … Watson Ladd
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] [Editorial] Lots of forw… ianswett
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] [Editorial] Lots of forw… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] [Editorial] Lots of forw… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] [Editorial] Lots of forw… Mike Bishop
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] [Editorial] Lots of forw… Jana Iyengar