[quicwg/base-drafts] Minor editorial fixes. (#1656)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Mon, 13 August 2018 17:31 UTC

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"indexes" occurs once while "indices" occurs six times, reconcile.  Small grammar fixes.  Position vertical arrow to center of block.  Update figure captions (Post-Base Index only applies to Request Streams).  Capitalize "Largest Reference" as it is done dozens of places elsewhere.  Fix obsolete reference to "frames" on control streams.
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-- Commit Summary --

  * Minor editorial fixes.

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md (30)

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https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1656.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/1656.diff

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