[quicwg/base-drafts] 67ba64: Remove pointer to appendix in PTO section (recover)

Jana Iyengar <noreply@github.com> Wed, 11 March 2020 05:58 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 67ba64: Remove pointer to appendix in PTO section (recover)
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  Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: 67ba647e290bc9ae625f3ca603788d5f9bcbc845
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/67ba647e290bc9ae625f3ca603788d5f9bcbc845
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Remove pointer to appendix in PTO section (recover)

I proposed to remove this sentence here because all these values have actually been just defined in the previous sections. If a pointer to the appendix is desired, I think that should be mentioned earlier (e.g. in the intro already) that these lists existing in the appendix.


  Commit: b75a51d13495932dac42ea577546505a8f7c1386
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/b75a51d13495932dac42ea577546505a8f7c1386
  Author: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>
  Date:   2020-03-10 (Tue, 10 Mar 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #3391 from mirjak/patch-13

Remove pointer to appendix in PTO section (recovery)


Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/89154a7b7478...b75a51d13495