Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial fix for #2479 (#2877)

[Jana Iyengar <[e-mail]>]

janaiyengar commented on this pull request.

A couple of changes

> -The next byte contains the length in bytes of the two Connection IDs (see
-{{connection-id}}) that follow.  Each length is encoded as a 4-bit unsigned
-integer.  The length of the Destination Connection ID (DCIL) occupies the high
-bits of the byte and the length of the Source Connection ID (SCIL) occupies the
-low bits of the byte.  An encoded length of 0 indicates that the connection ID
-is also 0 bytes in length.  Non-zero encoded lengths are increased by 3 to get
-the full length of the connection ID; the final value is therefore either 0 or
-between 4 and 18 bytes in length (inclusive).  For example, a byte with the
-value 0xe0 describes a 17 byte Destination Connection ID and a zero byte Source
-Connection ID.
-
-The connection ID lengths are followed by two connection IDs.  The connection
-ID associated with the recipient of the packet (the Destination Connection ID)
-is followed by the connection ID associated with the sender of the packet (the
-Source Connection ID).
+The byte contains the length in bytes of the Destination Connection ID (see

```suggestion
The next byte contains the length in bytes of the Destination Connection ID (see
```

> -is also 0 bytes in length.  Non-zero encoded lengths are increased by 3 to get
-the full length of the connection ID; the final value is therefore either 0 or
-between 4 and 18 bytes in length (inclusive).  For example, a byte with the
-value 0xe0 describes a 17 byte Destination Connection ID and a zero byte Source
-Connection ID.
-
-The connection ID lengths are followed by two connection IDs.  The connection
-ID associated with the recipient of the packet (the Destination Connection ID)
-is followed by the connection ID associated with the sender of the packet (the
-Source Connection ID).
+The byte contains the length in bytes of the Destination Connection ID (see
+{{connection-id}}) field that follows it.  This length is encoded as an 8-bit
+unsigned integer.  The Destination Connection ID field follows the DCID Len
+field and is between 0 and 255 bytes in length.
+
+The byte following the Source Connection ID contains the length in bytes

```suggestion
The next byte contains the length in bytes
```

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