Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] [qpack] Overhaul the pseudocode (#3577)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Thu, 16 April 2020 20:42 UTC

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@MikeBishop requested changes on this pull request.

Looks good.  Your build errors are due to line-length; I think this should fix them.

> +    # getNameIndex attempts to find an index for this header's name.
+    # If one exists, it returns the name's (absolute) index and a

```suggestion
    # getNameIndex searches for this header's name in the table.
    # If an entry matches, it returns the (absolute) index and a
```

>      if shouldIndex(header) and dynamicTable.canIndex(header):
-      encodeLiteralWithIncrementalIndex(controlBuffer, nameIdx,
-                                        header)
+      encodeInsert(encoderBuffer, nameIndex, isStaticName, header)

```suggestion
    encodeInsert(
        encoderBuffer, nameIndex, isStaticName, header
    )
```

> +  wireRIC =
+    (requiredInsertCount % (2 * getMaxEntries(maxTableCapacity))) + 1;

```suggestion
  wireRIC = (
    requiredInsertCount
    % (2 * getMaxEntries(maxTableCapacity))
  ) + 1
```

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