[quicwg/base-drafts] Add subsections to Retry packet section (#3570)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Wed, 08 April 2020 07:33 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Add subsections to Retry packet section (#3570)
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This was getting a little long.  You could get lost in there.

The text was fine, it was mostly well structured.  All it needed was one
small move and some headers.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3570

-- Commit Summary --

  * Add subsections to Retry packet section

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (15)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3570.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3570.diff

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