[quicwg/base-drafts] b38da3: Editorial: More concise intro text

Jana Iyengar <noreply@github.com> Fri, 28 February 2020 01:21 UTC

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  Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: b38da3b5b3f6de626ce324cd91226fb0ade25aa0
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/b38da3b5b3f6de626ce324cd91226fb0ade25aa0
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-22 (Wed, 22 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Editorial: More concise intro text

Just a proposal but I would prefer to remove the advertising slang ("decades of transport and security experience" and "makes it attractive").


  Commit: f458ac8271c7e50e1111794d454e52eee9bf590f
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/f458ac8271c7e50e1111794d454e52eee9bf590f
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

Co-Authored-By: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>


  Commit: 26a38dd8278fb208ff2610fc5b2aae5ec671206b
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/26a38dd8278fb208ff2610fc5b2aae5ec671206b
  Author: mirjak <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
  Date:   2020-01-23 (Thu, 23 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

Co-Authored-By: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>


  Commit: d8d72ab1e2c156657bc06f07f36585c66bdb06da
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/d8d72ab1e2c156657bc06f07f36585c66bdb06da
  Author: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>
  Date:   2020-01-24 (Fri, 24 Jan 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md


  Commit: 206ae8519c0eca337314a958ab181b9255b98643
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/206ae8519c0eca337314a958ab181b9255b98643
  Author: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>
  Date:   2020-02-27 (Thu, 27 Feb 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md


  Commit: bde607e16fd14e3d8a82035d7f5e6b8a8ba43d18
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/bde607e16fd14e3d8a82035d7f5e6b8a8ba43d18
  Author: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>
  Date:   2020-02-27 (Thu, 27 Feb 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #3380 from mirjak/patch-5

Editorial: More concise intro text (recovery)


Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/70b56f694d81...bde607e16fd1