[quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial Fixes for HTTP-QUIC (#3895)

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## Request Cancellation and Rejection 

1. it better be clarify  Implementation means Client/Server or both.

> When the client aborts reading a response, it indicates that this response is no longer of interest. **Implementations** SHOULD cancel requests by abruptly terminating any directions of a stream that are still open.


2. there are some of similar terms

- reset
- cancel
- reject
- abort
- (abruptly) terminate

it seems better to make them more clarify what each of them describes and how they can be done.

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