Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] DPLPMTU merge tweaks (#3702)

Gorry Fairhurst <notifications@github.com> Fri, 05 June 2020 12:59 UTC

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In the subsection on “Packet Size {#packet-size}”, I think the blocks of text describe two things. There is some general guidance on size, and there are specific instructions for the size of the initial packet. I’d suggest we do try to separate these two, it would make it much easier for someone to understand the size constraints for forming the initial packet.


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