Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Rearrange Packet Types section and references (#2203)

[Mike Bishop <[e-mail]>]

MikeBishop commented on this pull request.



> +: The length of the remainder of the packet (that is, the Packet Number and
+  Payload fields) in bytes, encoded as a variable-length integer
+  ({{integer-encoding}}).
+
+Packet Number:
+
+: The packet number field is 1 to 4 bytes long. The packet number has
+  confidentiality protection separate from packet protection, as described in
+  Section 5.4 of {{QUIC-TLS}}. The length of the packet number field is encoded
+  in the plaintext packet number. See {{packet-encoding}} for details.
+
+Payload:
+
+: The payload of the packet.
+
+### Initial Packet {#packet-initial}

I understand the desire not to move subsections below h3, but the mix of "format" and "instance" really just doesn't flow for me.  But it does kind of match the rest of the document with the "grouped sections" motif, so maybe it's at least consistent.

(It's already contorted enough that VN is a long header packet, but not from this version and therefore absent from the type table.)

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