Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] editorial changes in the closing section (#2315)

[Martin Thomson <[e-mail]>]

martinthomson commented on this pull request.



>  
 An endpoint enters a closing period after initiating an immediate close
 ({{immediate-close}}).  While closing, an endpoint MUST NOT send packets unless
 they contain a CONNECTION_CLOSE frame (see {{immediate-close}} for details).  An
 endpoint retains only enough information to generate a packet containing a
 CONNECTION_CLOSE frame and to identify packets as belonging to the connection.
-The connection ID and QUIC version is sufficient information to identify packets
-for a closing connection; an endpoint can discard all other connection state.
-An endpoint MAY retain packet protection keys for incoming packets to allow it
-to read and process a CONNECTION_CLOSE frame.
+The source and the destination connection ID and the QUIC version are sufficient

I don't know what people view as source and destination when not talking about packets.  That's not something we have crisp terms for, but using source and destination here makes that problem worse.

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