Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Improve language on blocking entries. (#3131)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Wed, 06 November 2019 21:04 UTC

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> > There were
> > already four sentences starting with "Note that" throughout the draft
> > before this PR (now there are six)....
> 
> Thanks for pointing out one of my main writing tics.  The other is overuse of em-dashes.
> 
> > Did #3172 address your concerns here? If not, you may need to rebase and resolve the conflicts.
> 
> The Note Bence improved is unnecessary and gone now, but I think Bence's other changes are orthogonal to #3172 and worth keeping.

Thanks.  I rebased and rephrased as necessary.

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