From nobody Tue Mar 3 13:12:09 2020 Return-Path: X-Original-To: quic-issues@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: quic-issues@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C37863A09B5 for ; Tue, 3 Mar 2020 13:12:08 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -3.099 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.099 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.001, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, HTML_IMAGE_ONLY_32=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, MAILING_LIST_MULTI=-1, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=github.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id QUwzsBLTTKK5 for ; Tue, 3 Mar 2020 13:12:06 -0800 (PST) Received: from out-13.smtp.github.com (out-13.smtp.github.com [192.30.254.196]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 5BCE13A09DD for ; Tue, 3 Mar 2020 13:12:06 -0800 (PST) Received: from github-lowworker-1dbcc59.ash1-iad.github.net (github-lowworker-1dbcc59.ash1-iad.github.net [10.56.105.54]) by smtp.github.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C670A261639 for ; Tue, 3 Mar 2020 13:12:05 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=github.com; s=pf2014; t=1583269925; bh=NEsztOeRb9a1+tqkHuqseLpMUNKSGV8ZjdzCTu1trU4=; h=Date:From:Reply-To:To:Cc:In-Reply-To:References:Subject:List-ID: List-Archive:List-Post:List-Unsubscribe:From; b=GBj6Eib7wEMnVhEn0GiFHSjPm9fEX/iJ3pUmQoh8qqsSpaqJRurYYpWpdwduTAvUv Isv31lZrwT+bnct9tlXZAs1n5cLCjDFXPAMjr8oyeWVoY20OzJRjxvyM/BS9LC0DRL 5yzNkmB8fQL3rGUXc66Q+Oyee84Slg/fQU2pefII= Date: Tue, 03 Mar 2020 13:12:05 -0800 From: ianswett Reply-To: quicwg/base-drafts To: quicwg/base-drafts Cc: Subscribed Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Subject: Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Adjust pointers to sections (#3494) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="--==_mimepart_5e5ec8257f274_18f23fb2306cd960133870"; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Precedence: list X-GitHub-Sender: ianswett X-GitHub-Recipient: quic-issues X-GitHub-Reason: subscribed X-Auto-Response-Suppress: All X-GitHub-Recipient-Address: quic-issues@ietf.org Archived-At: X-BeenThere: quic-issues@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 List-Id: Notification list for GitHub issues related to the QUIC WG List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Mar 2020 21:12:09 -0000 ----==_mimepart_5e5ec8257f274_18f23fb2306cd960133870 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit ianswett approved this pull request. > @@ -946,13 +946,14 @@ latest_rtt: smoothed_rtt: : The smoothed RTT of the connection, computed as described in - {{?RFC6298}} + Section {{smoothed-rtt}} ```suggestion Section {{smoothed-rtt}}. ``` > rttvar: -: The RTT variation, computed as described in {{?RFC6298}} +: The RTT variation, computed as described in Section {{smoothed-rtt}} ```suggestion : The RTT variation, computed as described in Section {{smoothed-rtt}}. ``` > min_rtt: -: The minimum RTT seen in the connection, ignoring ack delay. +: The minimum RTT seen in the connection, ignoring ack delay, as described + in Section {{min-rtt}} ```suggestion in Section {{min-rtt}}. ``` -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3494#pullrequestreview-368326973 ----==_mimepart_5e5ec8257f274_18f23fb2306cd960133870 Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

@ianswett approved this pull request.

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