Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Improve HTTP draft wording: frames carry identifier values (#3689)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Tue, 09 June 2020 22:36 UTC

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@MikeBishop pushed 73 commits.

de2b8544cc2449c97fc76d00efe0da83c2044e39  Move MUST not send bursts up in the pacing section
23e3109e596baa220b83923443df4ea60f71dde7  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md
290a5113d74c36b112d3ada80edc2f3ede23325b  Split PTO calculation into a dedicated method
d0050a08a17463fbf9f3bf25b61b50a982b4a07f  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md
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2630bfdfe743909fb7bd3a92a41bd5f794cc503d  Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md
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6ce4f9b1841f8f2296e7420b08a928a41f7f2a5a  Marten's suggestions
6de92cc83c3f7035140874aa971263cf47391f21  Fix pseudocode typo in OnPacketNumberSpaceDiscarded().
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