[quicwg/base-drafts] QPACK [editorial] Update text on instructions and representations. (#2941)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Wed, 31 July 2019 16:37 UTC

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* Use more uniform and more specific language in description of instructions, like "follows" instead of 
  "includes" or implicit mention of a field.
* Add references to integer and string encodings where missing.
* Prefer internal references to external ones (also in Section 1.2).
* Explicitly allow a header block to not have any instructions after the mandatory prefix.
* Refer to Literal Header Field With Name Reference section in Literal Header Field Without Name Reference instead of verbatim repeating text on 'N' bit.
* Reshuffle sentences, insert references instead, remove sentences where references suffice.
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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2941

-- Commit Summary --

  * clarify wire format

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md (134)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2941.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2941.diff

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