Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] ALPN Tokens and Alt-Svc (#90)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Tue, 03 January 2017 11:51 UTC

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martinthomson approved this pull request.



>  
-   Alt-Svc: quic=":443"; v="34,33"
+## QUIC version hints {#alt-svc-version-hint}

Should we use "Title Case For Headers" or "Sentence case for headers"?

>  on port 443 and, if successful, send HTTP requests using the mapping described
-in this document.
+in this document.  Servers SHOULD list only versions which they support, but MAY

This seems to refer to the example specifically.  but we're now a few paragraphs down.  Either speak generically "the client MAY attempt to establish a QUIC connection on the specified port" or refer to the example directly.

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