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ekr commented on this pull request.



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-- CONNECTION_CLOSE frames signaling application errors (type 0x1d) MUST only be
-  sent in packets at the 1-RTT encryption level.
+- ACK frames MAY appear in any packet number space, but can only acknowledge
+  packets which appeared in that packet number space.

This text is weird in light of the following graf that says that ACK is not permitted in 0-RTT. I would add a parenthetical "(however, as noted below, it is not possible for ACK frames to be sent in 0-RTT)"

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<p><b>@ekr</b> commented on this pull request.</p>

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<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3440#discussion_r389318361">draft-ietf-quic-tls.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt;  
-- CONNECTION_CLOSE frames signaling application errors (type 0x1d) MUST only be
-  sent in packets at the 1-RTT encryption level.
+- ACK frames MAY appear in any packet number space, but can only acknowledge
+  packets which appeared in that packet number space.
</pre>
<p>This text is weird in light of the following graf that says that ACK is not permitted in 0-RTT. I would add a parenthetical "(however, as noted below, it is not possible for ACK frames to be sent in 0-RTT)"</p>

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