Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Improve Idle Timeout text (#3414)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Tue, 10 March 2020 22:35 UTC

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martinthomson commented on this pull request.



>  and its state is discarded when it remains idle for longer than the minimum of
-the max_idle_timeouts (see {{transport-parameter-definitions}}) and three times
-the current Probe Timeout (PTO).
+the max_idle_timeouts and three times the current Probe Timeout (PTO).

```suggestion
the max_idle_timeout values and three times the current Probe Timeout (PTO).
```

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