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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Full (mostly) editorial pass (#1665)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Thu, 16 August 2018 18:07 UTC

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MikeBishop commented on this pull request.



>  a 1232 octet QUIC packet payload.  This includes overheads that reduce the space
 available to the cryptographic handshake protocol.
 
-The CRYPTO frame can be sent in different packet number spaces.  CRYPTO frames
+The CRYPTO frames can be sent in different packet number spaces.  CRYPTO frames

The original text, "The CRYPTO frame" talks about the CRYPTO frame as a unique type.  "CRYPTO frames" talks about the class of frames of that type.  Either would work here.  "The CRYPTO frames" sounds like a discrete set of frames which are being partitioned into the spaces.

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