Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Reword Immediate ACK Recommendation (#2424)

ianswett <notifications@github.com> Thu, 07 February 2019 21:28 UTC

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ianswett commented on this pull request.



> @@ -134,6 +134,11 @@ Crypto Packets:
 
 : Packets containing CRYPTO data sent in Initial or Handshake
   packets.
+  
+Out-of-order Packets:
+
+: Packets that do not increase the largest received packet number for its
+cryptographic context by exactly one.

My suggestion should have been "Packets arrive out of order when later packets are lost or delayed.", but Martin's suggestion is slightly better because it drops 'later', which is unnecessary.

The intent was as a replacement for Martin's suggestion, in addition to the first sentence you have.

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