[quicwg/base-drafts] Rearrange Packet Types section and references (#2203)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Tue, 18 December 2018 00:21 UTC

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Fixes #2165, #2157, and probably some others as well.  Trying to fix one thing wound up pulling on some other pieces as well, so this is larger than I intended.

Key changes are:
- Added discussion of 0-RTT Protected Packets, which were mysteriously absent, to Section 17
- Moved discussion of starting packet numbers for each space from the Initial Packet definition to the existing Packet Numbers section (17.1)
- Moved Short Header packets to end of 17 (from 17.3 to 17.8) to get all the long-header packet types together
- Removed the non-invariant fields (Length, Packet Number, Payload) from the definition of the Long Header and made them type-specific fields for those packets which contain them; this reduces explanation for packet types which don't
- Reordered forward references in Section 10 so the references in each paragraph are to sequential sections, with some text updates to accommodate the new order

If a comparison of the output doc is more useful than the Markdown diff, try [the output diff](https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=https://quicwg.github.io/base-drafts/draft-ietf-quic-transport.txt&url2=https://quicwg.github.io/base-drafts/transport/packet-types/draft-ietf-quic-transport.txt) or the [resulting document](https://quicwg.github.io/base-drafts/transport/packet-types/draft-ietf-quic-transport.html).
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-- Commit Summary --

  * Move packet number discussion
  * Rearrange Section 17
  * Update Section 12
  * Version negotiation doesn't "appear to" use the long header, it actually does

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (443)

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